"You led me across the vast meadow, […]
in the evening, under a vast sky,
under sharp stars,
a sky spreading righteously
over what lasts
and the lazy river of remembrance.
Listening to: Fear of Men - Green Sea & Tete - Emerald Sky
this piece is really eye-catching and gorgeous! the thing that really caught my attention was the beautiful and soft color palette you chose. the textures and overlays add a lot of interest to the piece as well. the character has a beautiful, serene and dreamy expression that matches well with the pose. if there’s one thing i would wanna critique, it would be that i think the piece could use more highlights to make it pop more. all in all, i really like your work! great job ♡
Also, thank you for taking time critique-ing! You have provided me with some really helpful tips so that I can improve in the future!! Yeah, I agree, after looking over the artwork again, I believe some highlighting would be really nice and it will make the picture more striking and eye-catching! I wanted the atmosphere to be soft and serene so I totally forgot all about trying to make it pop-out. After what you mention, I realize that's what I can do to make the picture even better. So thank you!!
There are times I feel like giving up but then I still want to finish and feel productive so yeah I just continued and finished X_X